Cute character designs, blue on gray feel great, and seeing that you drew on paper has its own essence in itself to bring the story alive. The burst of movement from one planet to another is felt. When the composition from right to left bursts, then left to right is confusing. Continuing the burst from right to left will probably help. The adventurous spirit of connecting with one another at the end is fantastic! It's going to be soo good with music and sound! Great job!

Thank you! I didnt even think about the bursts from the left to right and vice versa. Thank you for pointing that out.

Hi Cristol. Your drawings are nicely simple, the usage of color and shapes of the characters helps it easier to read. Without editing or sound the story can be a bit hard to analyze. But with more experience, you definitely have potential to be greater. Keep it up!

Thank you. That really does help. I do need to work a little more on my pacing and editing skills to make this story flow and feel better. Thank you for the feedback!

Good job! Really like the choice of the character and the world. Even though it's a bit difficult to understand some details because there is no editing and voice over yet but I can still understand the gist of the story. Can't wait to see the story after it is fully finished!

Cute character design, has potential.

I love your drawings so cute and your idea but I kinda wished for a supporting voice over/ narration to explain more the idea as I had to read the caption to understand more on the big picture! Good job!

Thanks for the feedback. I am having trouble with the editing to add audio but still even so I appreciate you letting me know the story isn't totally understandable

That’s totally fine! Your story is great already!

Here’s a link for the resources that team experiential made, it has different resources and tabs for editing, music and sound effects free or with subscription, https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/15j2wCBBEjOpSgvzpT0PWVgMhQzQc_1TBHo8nsYznlME/edit

I personally use soundstripe.com a paid website that starts with few dollars.

And also there’s iMovie on iphone or mac for free and also if you write cruelty free music on YouTube you’ll fine some cool stuff too! Good luck, I wish you all the best ! Feel free to reach back if you need any help!

Also if you go on the home page, on the orientation tab you’ll find another tab on top that says video editing!

Thank you for all the tips and resources! I have used the resources that they have offered here but I think its just my computer. I'll try and see if I can borrow a friend or relative's that i can work with easier :)

It happens!! Good luck and congratulations on finishing the program !!