I can see the level of passion was really high in each drawing, you enjoyed making this story. Nice Work!

I saw this story a few weeks ago and I thought it was a super cool idea to see that toys kids play with come to life and create a fully functioning city. I think this was fun to watch and you characters help bring happiness to the viewer, great job!

This is such a good and cute idea! I loved the illustrations, and the narration was good too! The part where the monsters came in was a little abrupt, so I was a little confused when it got to the monsters, but I understood the moral in the very end! I would have loved to know more about the brother and the little sister, and more of the character development. I also liked the symbolism with the building blocks and the actual city! Good job :)

Really fun idea for a story and I like the ending. Congrats on finishing the course and getting a final project together too!

This is such a creative story! I love the message you integrated into this story between such young characters. Your drawings are very precise and coordinate well with the story. I think you could use a bit more development inside the time span with Sammy living inside the city to give your story some minor beats. And maybe at the beginning of your story you could have more development on why there is such conflict between Sammy and his sister. I think this can make the ending seem more conclusive and less rushed.

I think this story was interesting. Your drawings well portrayed what was happening in the story. The ending was a bit abrupt so I'm guessing you didn't finish. I love what you have so far. I would just suggest speaking a bit slower so there's more time to see each picture.