Hello Everyone -

I'm back! I added a few more things to the overall pitch for my story after all your super helpful comments (I wasn't able to work on much more, I know this really isn't much in terms of "Acts") but I'm at least pleased to present something that reads as more overall a pitch -- and "pitch" being a close-to-my-chest statement, after working on this idea through Story Xperiential I've grown to love it, and wish I could have given it more attention that I was able to, (life events notwithstanding). My fiancé and I have talked, and I've always wanted to get into comics and novels, and I've decided that this would be something I would really enjoy turning into something longer, readable. So maybe next you see this story, it may be online or on shelves for you to enjoy, full story!

Thanks everyone so much for following me close on this story and I'll see you around!