You made a lot of graphics to support your story. I am confused about the penguin feather, and then the ruby. I liked the arrows so that I could pause the reel and really follow your story. I wonder if you could separate the storyline by taking closeups of the pictures and running them as separate slides? Great work!

The art is very nice.

Congratulations on finishing the story! And this is the last week so I wish you all the best!

I thought the story was super interesting, and I liked how the ruby was bright red to draw attention to it to show its importance. Good job finishing the story!

Great to see your final project! I don't think there is a need for me to provide feedback since this is it. ;) This was the first final project I got to see on here. Good job and nice to see you finish it!