YAY!
It's an actual final version :) The story's there! Plenty of missing things to ignore and learn from for the next one (the drawings aren't magical but seem to convey what's happening, there's not yet voice acting but the narration is mostly turned into dialogue, the spine has a vague act structure but the story does lead to a conclusion, it's rough but certainly has character, somehow lost some frames in the last edit, etc :) ) Interestingly, I started out telling about perfectionism - so it's been quite a character arc for me, as well.

All considered, I'm happy with it - I hope you like it, too :) The story's personal in some sense, though that's artistically more often the case when you try to follow what resonates, right?