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Nicolas (1 like)
I like the sound/narration. The characters' voices and sound effects were good as well.
Aug 22, 2022, 2:09 AM
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Tariq (1 like)
I enjoyed this story! Very good work :)
Aug 21, 2022, 10:57 PM
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Mason (1 like)
It is asking me to comment on your project one again, so apologies for the double feedback. ;) Still a good story!
Aug 21, 2022, 2:36 PM
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Vivyan (1 like, 1 helpful)
I liked the story. I feel like at times narration wasn't needed because either it was said through dialogue or shown in pictures which is a good thing because you want to tell the story through pictures. You give a good moral and the sound effects you added really fit the story. Though there were some times I wasn't really sure how one thing led to another like why does launching an alien bird into space make Jack realize he misses his mom? Overall, good work! If you ever wanted to create another storyreel in the future I would suggest adding more context either through narration or more pictures.
Aug 20, 2022, 11:03 PM
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Mason (1 like)
Thank you for the warning. Your volume did great and wasn't too loud on my computer! I have enjoyed this story and I like the effects you added along with the dialogue. It all came together really well and I like the idea of facing your fears being the moral because it is something we all relate too. Good work!!
Aug 20, 2022, 5:00 PM
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A dritten name Jack that is scared of birds so he feels like he's safer on the moon. But is it true that there are no birds on the moon?
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